Friday, November 13, 2015

On a Date With Asperger's in Jonathan Carlander's "The Pleasing List" Short Drama Film

Genre: Drama
Length- 9:04
Company:  Carlander Films

Chris (Ken Ashton) has a first date with Sarita (Jessie Owen) -- a nervewracking experience for anyone -- but for him, it's even more anxiety inducing because he lives with Asperger's Syndrome.

It might be a bit cart before the horse to ask if he'll get the girl because between social and emotional factors, he's got a lot of challenges to overcome.  Perhaps it's more apt to ask if he'll make it to the date to begin with . . .


Writer/director Jonathan Carlander brings us "The Pleasing List", a short drama film that deals with loneliness, understanding and Asperger's.  It's an interesting idea, and the script addresses it with some thought, but it never quite comes together.

There's not a lot going on beyond the date, story-wise, so I have to keep quiet for the most part here, so I'll go straight to the technical side of things.

His visual style keeps the story moving and the film is easy on the eyes.  The actors do well.  it's all edited down to a very manageable seven minutes of actual film and a couple minutes of credits, and nothing feels excessive.

It's competently made, in other words.  It's a good film at heart, the finale just feels a little too . . . easy.  I can't say more than that without spoiling anything.


Writing: 2 / 5.  I like the idea of the film, I enjoyed where it was going, but the finale just didn't pay off for me.
Directing: 3  / 5.  Carlander has a simple, sober directing style and it works here.  There's no need to rush the visuals in a drama.
Editing: 4 / 5.  Carlander also edited the film, and the picture's pacing is ideal.
Sound/Music: 3 / 5.  Steven Vernon handled the music.  The sound was audible and recorded well enough.
Acting: 3 / 5.  Ashton and Owen did the best here, but Marcus Bradford and Jeremy Lasman were also credible in their roles.  Good work.

Final Grade: 3 / 5.

Don't forget to check out "The Pleasing List" and follow writer/director Jonathan Carlander on Facebook!

Wednesday, November 11, 2015

Is There Life After Dreams? Matthew P. Rojas Examines In "The Amputation"

Genre: Drama
Length- 8:46
Company:  Silent Stone Films

Jack "The Dodger" Duddy (Nathan Marlow) was an up and coming boxer with the championship in his sights, and nobody could stop him from reaching his goal.  He was a man possessed, in other words -- a powerhouse.  Boxing wasn't just a sport to him.  It was life.  More than life, even.

But just before he can see those dreams realized, something happens -- something that forces him to re-evaluate not only what his physical body means, but what he means, and who he is as a man.

Is anything left after dreams?


Writer/director Matthew P. Rojas wowed me last year with his short thriller "In This Myth of Vengeance" (which also featured Marlow).  He's a young filmmaker, to be sure, but he's wrapping thrills and thought together with a certain understated spiritual undertone that I haven't seen before in short film -- and that's exciting.

So when I heard he had a new project under way, I was excited to see what he'd come up with, to say the least.  Well, I was not expecting this -- "The Amputation" is part one of a longer work aptly titled "Steams in the Wasteland", a stream of consciousness style meditation on man, happiness, and the swampy land where most of us get stuck in the pursuit of our dreams.   But to say I wasn't expecting it is a positive thing.  Once again, Rojas has surprised me, and done so with reckless abandon, and I love him for it.


This film also has another interesting point for it: there are a pair of guest directors on hand: Rob Martinez worked on the news segment of the film, and part two of "Streams in the Wasteland" will be handled in part by Jonathan Mendoza, so it's a collaborative effort.  Even so, the segments flow extremely well and I would not have guessed there were multiple hands in the pie had the credits not told me so.

"The Amputation" is made up of dark, moody vignettes peppered with documentary style interview footage of Jack.  Rojas' directorial style is evident here, with a really awesome over-the-shoulder angle of Jack talking to the camera, but almost doing so off camera.


The dialogue is realistic and well written, and Marlow's delivery is on the ball every single time.  His acting is nothing short of brilliant, and heartbreaking at just the right moments.  The script conveys a sense of weightlessness: one moment, we're seeing footage on a lonely television set in a black abyss.  In the next, we're watching Jack in his prime.  In the next, he's wheeling himself through memory after memory of days gone by, or are they actually the present after all?

A few complaints: first of all, nothing's resolved and no final conclusion is made.  Perhaps more will be made apparent of Jack's story in part two?  Considering how intriguing the rest of the film is, I felt like all these pieces of Jack's psyche were going to be brought together somehow into one cohesive, "Eureka!" moment, but that didn't happen.  Also, Afomia Hailemeskel's performance is scattershot.  Sometimes, she hits just the right notes for being a reporter, and at other times she feels forced.


Writing: 3 / 5.  The script is dark and interesting, but doesn't feel complete as it is.  I review short films on their own merits, so maybe this is me missing the point of a larger picture, but I had to knock it down a point for not concluding in a satisfying way.
Directing: 4 / 5.  Many of the shots of the film were memorable, but I much enjoyed the TV  shots and the interview footage.  
Editing: 4 / 5.  Rojas also edited the film, and the cutting style is sharp and off putting -- intentionally so.  It works extremely well to create great tension throughout.
Sound/Music: 4 / 5.  An emotional soundtrack and solid sound design, but I'd expect nothing less considering Rojas' previous effort, "In This Myth of Vengeance".  We've got music from Luke Atencio, Sugar + The Hi-Lows, and classical from Antonin Dvorak -- all properly licensed.
Acting: 3.5 / 5.  Marlow puts on a great show as Jack "The Dodger" Duddy.  Hailemeskel is a mixed bag when it comes to playing the news reporter.

Final Grade: 3.7 / 5.

Don't forget to check out Matthew P. Rojas on Facebook and visit his official website right here to keep up to date on when "The Amputation" will be coming to a screen near you!

Monday, November 9, 2015

Sean Meehan's Comedy Short Invites You For a Workplace Romance . . . "Over Coffee"

"OVER COFFEE" (2011)
Genre: Romantic Comedy
Length- 15:25
Company:  A Studio in Production & Two-Five Films

So good guy Andrew (Erik Potempa) has a crush on super hot secretary Carla (Jocelyn DeBoer), but her mean boss (Timothy J. Cox) makes outrageous demands on a minute to minute basis and has a way of sapping every human moment from their would-be relationship.

Add into the mix Andrew's well meaning but ultimately sex obsessed friend David (Michael Oberholtzer) and you've got a stew that . . . well, you probably shouldn't taste it, because it might be poison.  But, poison as it might be, it's his poison -- er, life, so he's got to make due with what he's got.

And when Carla needs to get her mean boss a coffee at the last minute, and Andrew has a moment to spare, he leaps to her rescue.

How does it turn out for the poor guy?  Well, I'll leave that to you to find out.


Sean Meehan wrote and directed "Over Coffee", and you might recognize his name because we've reviewed his award winning ghost comedy "Mallas, MA" right here back in May.  That film also starred Cox in a lead role.  "Over Coffee" is an earlier effort -- this one's back from 2011, and it definitely shows.

While Meehan's got some good pacing and maintains a certain comedic rhythm to the shots and the cutting (for which he's also credited, along with Matt Schwarz), the results, to the extremely low key writing, just aren't funny.  A little bit of the coffee shenanigans toward the end made me chuckle, but too much of the rest of the film didn't do it for me.  I wouldn't go so far as to say it was boring, as the film is competently made and it makes you wonder what's going to happen, but it's not compelling enough for me to label the film as a dramedy, and not funny enough to say it's a successful comedy.

The acting is the strongest feature of this film.  Every actor on display in this film does well with what they are given.  Potempa, DeBoer, Oberholtzer and the always reliable Cox are all worthy of praise, and I much enjoyed the ending, which was cute and felt right on the money for the tone of the picture.

"Over Coffee" delivers a well acted but flawed short film that, due to its lack of laughs feels way too long.  But if you stick it out to the end, the finale makes up for the bumpy road getting there.


Writing: 1.5 / 5.  The characters are all a bit too cliche, and the script as a whole just isn't funny enough to keep my attention like Meehan's other work.  
Directing: 2 / 5.  Effective camera movement.  A competent show from Meehan.
Editing: 2.5 / 5.  The editing kept the story moving as best as it could, but it would have benefited from punchier jokes.
Sound/Music: 2 / 5.  The sound design wasn't perfect, with the levels not 100% even from cut to cut, but it's still done well.  The music felt too on the nose, with some original tunes from Erik Campo and others from Kevin MacLeod of Incompetech.
Acting: 4 / 5.  Really impressive work from everyone on display, and I hope to see a whole lot more from all of them.  

Final Grade: 2.4  / 5.

Don't forget to check out "Over Coffee" and follow writer/director Sean Meehan on Facebook!

Tuesday, November 3, 2015

Let's Just Make It Happen: An Exclusive Interview With Filmmaker & Actress Valentina Isis ("Fear Thy Neighbor")

"For some, 2012 was the end of the world," Columbian born actress Valentina Isis says.  "For me, it was the beginning of my metamorphosis."

She's an award winning filmmaker and she's only 25.  Her films are forged in hard work and integrity, and while she's college educated, she's a permanent student of Do It Yourself Academy.

Working everything from music videos to commercials to highly personal films laced with mysticism, she's every bit as mysterious as her latest film, "Fear Thy Neighbor", which she released with writer/director Josh Goodman this year under her own Quixotica Films banner.

"I want to be genuine and authentic to my word," she says.  "Sometimes being picky is good."

Valentina was kind enough to sit down and discuss "Fear Thy Neighbor" and so much more a few months ago, and there's no better time than now that this film is hitting the festival circuit to share it with all of you.  Enjoy!

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FCSFR: Talk to me about Quixotica Films and how it began.

VALENTINA ISIS:  I met Christopher during college when I was working as a nude model for artists at his animation school.  Once I graduated, I tried the actor life for some time.  I got a restaurant job, once in a while got some castings where they type-cast you while under an agent that knows a quarter of your talents -- you know, the usual.  I bought equipment and left to Colombia to film, grow, and sink my roots deeper into the earth.

Columbia has a very big diversity in their ecosystem, so there's a lot more to see and it's so fruitful and full of life, but here (in Florida) it's a lot more organized and it's a lot more calmer.  You can actually progress . . . unfortunately my country has a lot of growing up to do, I guess.

FCSFR: I've done very little traveling, but I've been to a few different states.

VI: Oh you should totally go and travel internationally.  It really does expand your world.  I did it almost purposefully, to sort of wake myself up.  I'd been so sheltered here for so long, I wanted to feel a little bit of hardship.  I isolated myself and stayed in a farm, just in nature, creating, that's when I did my first short film.  It was a great experience.  But then after a year, I was like, "OK, I'm a citizen of the United States.  I don't have to be here."  (laughs)

FCSFR: The film you're talking about though, that's the twenty minute --

VI: The twenty seven minute short film, my first -- that was so -- I don't know what I was thinking.  (laughs) I went crazy.  I did this sci-fi, this girl, she's like a humanoid that comes from another planet to this new Earth, and there's no population and she has to be the one who brings the population into the world.  So she's been traveling through outer space for a very long time, and the male entity that was waiting there for her, he has tried to find ways to find technology to keep him alive to wait for her to get there, because it's light years away.  So when she finally gets there, he's just a floating head.  (laughs)

FCSFR: And this is "Kisanti No. 11", right?

VI: Right.  I did the script, I produced it, I directed, I acted, I did the art direction, all the costumes were hand made, practically, by me and the other partner I was doing it with.  He was the one who was doing the camera and music -- the sound of the movie.  I did the editing.  It took pretty much the entire year I was there, because I was tackling something I wasn't even trained for, to tell you the truth.  I'd studied acting, and touched and dabbled in film, but it was a big, ambitious project for me, for sure.

FCSFR: This was a great way for you to learn the ropes, too.  Sort of a trial by fire.

VI: Exactly, yeah.  And the person I was doing the film with, his name was Harry.  He'd worked with a huge TV network in Columbia for ten years.  He practically coached me, he pretty much said, 'Let's do this, just the two of us'.  And I just watched and learned.

FCSFR: And that was your first Quixotica film, right?

VI: Yes, that was the first thing that I did.  And then I started expanding.  After a year and five more productions under my belt I felt ready come back home and that's when I got in contact with Christopher again.  He told me about the Action Film Festival and that's when I met Josh [Goodman, director].  We finished with four nominations and an award for best actress at the Action Film Festival.

FCFSR: How much input did you have on the script to "Fear Thy Neighbor"?  Josh mentioned that you helped him with it.

VI: During the developing process of the script, I helped mainly with the characterization.  I wanted the characters to feel real even if they’re crazy.  I also helped in the order of the sequence of events of the story to create a good emotional arc in the story.

FCSFR: What attracted you to Josh's script?  What makes you interested in reading a script to begin with?

VI: Well, to tell you the truth, I never read the script before I decided to do it.  We had just finished doing the Action Film Festival and I didn’t want to lose the momentum and the creative flow in the group, so I asked who had a script.  Josh mentioned a script that he wrote in high school.  I felt it was the perfect moment to finish what he started -- with a little help from his friends.  Josh pitched the story and we polished it and made it happen.  I always love when everyone in the crew has its time to shine and this was Josh’s time.

FCSFR: Your character, who doesn't even get a name in the finished film, is a really complicated woman, and your performance matches her note for note.  Tell me about what you did to get ready to play this role.  Did you find it challenging to get into her headspace?

VI: I was very excited to play this role since my favorite roles are strong, taboo breaking, complex women with a little bit of sexiness and mysticism.  I worked with a psychologist to understand her behaviors, motives, dreams, fears and perception.

My process consists of highly analytical research.  I call it "creating the mind of the character": his perception, intelligence and sense of logic.  After I take all this information in, I throw it into the fires of creativity which can only be accessed by movement, improvisation,  imagination, visualization, speech and recreating the environment of the character.  This step is called “the will within.”  The heart of the character comes when the will and mind are united.  Last but not least, the spirit comes from constructing an astrological natal chart for the character.  The challenge that this role brought sparked my curiosity for her until I learned to sympathize and love her.

FCSFR: Do you see yourself as an actress primarily or do you see yourself equally as important behind the camera?  What interests you about both areas of filmmaking?

VI: I see myself primarily as an actor, but I do feel equally as important behind the camera.

FCSFR: "Fear Thy Neighbor" is a pretty challenging role, and a fairly dark film as a whole.  Is there anywhere you wouldn't want to go thematically?  Can a film be too bleak, or too dark, for your tastes?

VI: The only genres I wouldn’t do would be gore, snuff and pornography.  I feel that sometimes those films can spread more pain than love.  Now, don’t get me wrong -- I love risky, taboo breaking, fearless, limit pushing characters.  As long as the script brings a transformation from the suffering and a rebirth of a new self within the character, I will participate in the film no matter how far the character goes.  Films that use pain just for the sake of shocking their audience is not my cup of tea.

FCSFR: What excites you as a filmmaker?  Are you particular to a certain genre or do you want to pursue a wide range of cinematic endeavors?

VI: What excites me as a filmmaker is the power to become a catalyst in humanity’s evolution.  A movie exposes a wide range of emotions, thoughts, and experiences.  It transcends time, race, language, worlds and even galaxies.  Imagination has no limits.  I will pursue a wide range of cinematic endeavors throughout my career.  As an artist, your education never ends and every creative opportunity, no matter how foreign it might be to your present self, is a perfect time to expand your horizon to unknown territories where you can face all your demons.  I thrive in being comfortable with the uncomfortable.

FCSFR: What's next for Quixotica Films?  

VI: Right now, I have a lot of things this year I haven't actually released.  Like I have four things that are in post-production right now so I haven't released those yet.  But every year you get better, and you expand a little bit more, and I guess it's just a matter of getting a lot of experience and doing it constantly.

FCSFR: Speaking of which, one of the big things I've noticed is you've been so prolific in such a short time.  You've mentioned the four productions, and you have so many more coming.  So maybe you could talk a little bit about the bane of all filmmakers, money -- how you manage to make that work.  And I'd love to see the rest of your work -- I loved "Fear Thy Neighbor", I thought it was amazing, but I'm assuming that the rest of your work is of similar production value.  How are you managing to produce such high quality stuff on the cheap, and so many?

VI: I mean, you know, I feel like when I started doing filmmaking and dabbling in all the little aspects, I love doing it all.  I'm a very versatile girl, a Jack of All Trades.  If you have all these traits, the more work you get.  So I started doing all these things, and I realized what was my biggest talent was bringing people together.  And that's my biggest quality that I have so . . .

I saved money and bought some equipment for myself.  And I realized it's not about doing it by yourself, it's about exercising your muscles of leadership because in filmmaking, you're managing huge amounts of people sometimes, and it's a very social oriented job.

So I started focusing more on trying to bring people together who love what they do and who are good at what they do and are willing to go the extra mile who, even if we have nothing in our pockets, you know, it's like we have our equipment, we have our minds and our talents and the resources around us -- let's just make it happen.  I've always sort of been that way, and the people I work with, I motivate them to be like that.  We don't need anything.

I have a [Canon] 5D Mark III, and most of the work I've produced has been with that camera, and the high quality work, I guess that comes more with the post-production, you know, playing with the color correction.

I also work as an actor in high productions, commercials and things like that, and one thing I see is when you get into those high budget productions, there's a little thing that gets lost along the way which is you're not making it your own, sometimes.  You're just making a commercial about a beer.  It's irrelevant to the things you actually believe in, or the things that come creatively inside of you.

That's been the quality that makes my work special.  I bring in people who are totally willing to be inspired, and they're always there to do it.  "Fear Thy Neighbor" came from doing a action film festival, before that.  I already felt the energy going with them, and I didn't want it to dissipate.  I already wanted to jump into something else.  That's when Josh [Goodman] said he had a script from high school, and I said, "OK, let's do it."  And just keep going.

FCSFR: So let's say that I bring you a script.  You read the script, and there's some demanding stuff in there, production wise.  Does that intimidate you, or would you start looking for ways to make it work anyway?

VI: I'm a very warrior like person when it comes to anything creative.  I tackle that head on.  I tackle it, and I try really hard to make it work even if we don't have the money, or find someone who has the thing that we need.  A lot of resources are there for us to use.  If I'm touched by a story and I feel like the world needs to be touched by it as well, I will try my best to bring it out.

You feel like when you have more money you can make it more legit and more awesome, but I feel like if you're putting love into it, everything you're putting into it you're doing with love and intention, it shines through the film.

FCSFR: In "Fear Thy Neighbor", Josh had sent me some information on the synopsis of the story, I had no expectations on the film itself, but I sat and watched it and I assumed the story was going one direction and they just went a completely different way.  I don't want to spoil too much, but when you're playing a role like this one, it's got to be fun to just play with audience's preconceptions.

VI: Well, I guess to tell you the truth when I tackle a character I try to just really go into its world and not so much . . . I see how audiences would feel that way, but when I was doing my character, I was just going at it like what is her world?  How will she act, how will she be?  I don't feel like I was trying to deceive the audience, I never really felt like, "Oh, look, now the audience will be surprised".

FCSFR: When you were actually performing, how much faith did you have in your performance and the direction?  With that final shot, I loved what you did, in the final shot where you just whispered the final lines and the angle that Josh hit, it was just brilliant.  When you're actually in a shoot like that, how convinced are you that you nailed it?

VI: I guess the only time you feel like you nailed it is if you feel good.  You prepare, and you do your best, but at the end of the day you're just trying to have fun.  You're playing.  Actors used to be called players, they're the ones who play the situation, and it only feels right when you feel like you're channeling something, when it takes you over.  It feels like an entity possesses me, or a complex part of myself -- I get into that creative part of myself and if it feels nice and it feels good, then I know I'm doing it right.

Because every time you get on stage, there is something vulnerable about that situation, but the audience wants you to do good.  They don't want you to do a bad job.  But if I'm enjoying it, and loving what I'm doing, I'm uninhibited.  I'm soaking into it, I love being intimate, that's when you know you nailed it.  Josh, he has full trust on me when it comes to the acting.  I went to school for acting, Josh went to school for film and he's great on the technical side.  He sees it, he likes it and he knows it's going well.

FCSFR: And finally, our final question: if you could rewind to before you began Quixotica Films and give that younger self one piece of advice, what would it be?

VI: Love yourself, value your work, enjoy every present moment of the journey to your dreams and when you live by your authentic soul signature only then you will make all your dreams come true.

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Much thanks go out to Valentina for her time and extremely thoughtful answers to my questions.  It's amazing how fast an hour can fly by!

If you haven't had the chance, check out my review of "Fear Thy Neighbor" here and read the exclusive interview with writer/director Josh Goodman by clicking here!  And do NOT forget to "like" the film on Facebook, because it's one you don't want to miss -- I even declared it an HONORABLE MENTION of Forest City Short Film Review's Must See Short Films of 2015!  

Check out the trailer below!

Thanks for reading! I'm a screenwriter and script consultant. Most recently, I've worked with LMC Productions and Mad Antz Films in Australia. I helped mold Goodybag Productions' award winning screenplay "The Teacher" and Michael Maguire's feature length script "The Wolfpack", which is still in development.

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